For the intro:
Would change either the color or use quotes so the reader knows it's two different people for ease. Also "Maybe guy got...." Would put "Maybe this guy..." Just to help the reader further.
For this - Would put somewhere what it impacts for the player.
Same for what each stat would mean and do for the game.
Also would be good for a pop up to confirm or even a bit of info to see how you compare to other NPCS with the stats in the world so you know if you built it okay or not.
So Expenses Payment day - Would have Payment due day as payment day seems to be when you will get paid at a glance. Also would put Debt payment due or something for the second payment if it refers to that.
So the stat screen at creation did not talk about the xp however this looks like it was 1% so this makes me very worried this is a very grindy game to say the least. Also if it was reprogramming iris colors would that not also give xp for computers?
Would have a thought bubble/game tip of where one could find it to help the player.
scavenging - Might want to check the odds. Over 15 times on Normal (Web browser) and just found the bot, arms and legs.
will keep playing and give more feedback as love these kind of games and hope this helps
Would change either the color or use quotes so the reader knows it's two different people for ease. Also "Maybe guy got...." Would put "Maybe this guy..." Just to help the reader further.
For this - Would put somewhere what it impacts for the player.
Same for what each stat would mean and do for the game.
Also would be good for a pop up to confirm or even a bit of info to see how you compare to other NPCS with the stats in the world so you know if you built it okay or not.
So Expenses Payment day - Would have Payment due day as payment day seems to be when you will get paid at a glance. Also would put Debt payment due or something for the second payment if it refers to that.
So the stat screen at creation did not talk about the xp however this looks like it was 1% so this makes me very worried this is a very grindy game to say the least. Also if it was reprogramming iris colors would that not also give xp for computers?
Would have a thought bubble/game tip of where one could find it to help the player.
scavenging - Might want to check the odds. Over 15 times on Normal (Web browser) and just found the bot, arms and legs.
will keep playing and give more feedback as love these kind of games and hope this helps