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This image was one of the first I made to promote my kinetic novel. I made it years ago, having a clear idea of what moment it represented. In the next update, Christine will make this call.
Marian is one of my first OC. Her role in the novel is still not fully revealed. It will. Soon.
- Jan 22, 2020
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The language throughout was pretty poor and I'm not sure if it's down to that or just the erratic writing style, but a lot of the time I wasn't really sure what it was trying to go for. I did found it pretty humorous that this bit at the start had multiple errors, though I should have really taken that as a sign of things to come.
Because that very sentence was inserted at the very end and was not revised
.With each update I try to improve the text but there is always something to fix.
Just now I finished a re-read from top to bottom and other typos (and renderings with errors) emerged.
I know perfectly well that this is an aspect that I need to improve.
Thanks anyway for reading it.
- Feb 20, 2024
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So everyone is fucking everyone. In other words, a complete nightmare and I'm not touching this.
Hi, unfortunately I am not yet able to make the Android version.
Searching on Google I found a conversion made by others. Not being involved in the creation and not having tried it, I don't know whether to tell you to download it. Maybe some
kind spirit on the forum will make a mod for Android.
I made it myself.
The link to the android version is in the main post
- Dec 19, 2019
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